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TOR Hershman
Not Funny
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JohnOAS
SFN Regular
Australia
800 Posts |
Posted - 01/04/2007 : 20:46:25 [Permalink]
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Maybe it's just too late on Friday afternoon, but did anyone else find that astoundingly painful?
I actually watched and listened to all of the first bit, and browsed elewhere for bits of the second part, but listened to all of it.
Don't take this the wrong way, Torr, I'm not criticising you personally, or especially your intentions/motives, I just found this particular piece somewhat 'orrible.
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Dave W.
Info Junkie
USA
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beskeptigal
SFN Die Hard
USA
3834 Posts |
Posted - 01/05/2007 : 05:23:50 [Permalink]
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Give me a summary first, thanks. |
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furshur
SFN Regular
USA
1536 Posts |
Posted - 01/05/2007 : 08:33:05 [Permalink]
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Reminded me of a root canal. I watched about a minute thinking it was going to get better - it didn't...
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GeeMack
SFN Regular
USA
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Posted - 01/05/2007 : 09:00:02 [Permalink]
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quote: Originally posted by beskeptigal...
Give me a summary first, thanks.
I'm with you, b'gal. Linking to a video without a summary or description of what I might expect to see is like linking to any other article, image, or web page without offering some preliminary relevant comments. I'm hesitant to click a link in those situations even if the poster is a regular SFNer. If it's a first time poster, I'm probably not the only one who thinks of it as just another hunk of spam.
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Neurosis
SFN Regular
USA
675 Posts |
Posted - 01/05/2007 : 09:14:56 [Permalink]
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Guys it's his video. He even has the same name. |
Facts! Pssh, you can prove anything even remotely true with facts. - Homer Simpson
[God] is an infinite nothing from nowhere with less power over our universe than the secretary of agriculture. - Prof. Frink
Lisa: Yes, but wouldn't you rather know the truth than to delude yourself for happiness? Marge: Well... um.... [goes outside to jump on tampoline with Homer.] |
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H. Humbert
SFN Die Hard
USA
4574 Posts |
Posted - 01/05/2007 : 11:51:27 [Permalink]
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Yeah, it's obviously something he put together himself and worked pretty hard on, so I'm hesitant to be critical. I think it was meant to be tongue in cheek, with the over-wrought language and "journey through time" theme overdone for comedic effect. It just didn't quite work for me.
Tor, I'm assuming you wrote the text first and then put it to images later. It seems to me that in many cases the images you chose were longer than time it took to say a given line, making for a video that takes a really long time to get anywhere. I would try to streamline it quite a bit so that it moves along at a brisker pace. People's attention spans--especially for clips on the net--are short. If you don't get somewhere in the first 60 seconds, expect people to change the channel.
Just my two cents.
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"A man is his own easiest dupe, for what he wishes to be true he generally believes to be true." --Demosthenes
"The first principle is that you must not fool yourself - and you are the easiest person to fool." --Richard P. Feynman
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TOR Hershman
Not Funny
51 Posts |
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JohnOAS
SFN Regular
Australia
800 Posts |
Posted - 01/07/2007 : 18:49:49 [Permalink]
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quote: Originally posted by TOR Hershman
Moi's audio response http://www.soundlift.com/band/music.php?song_id=88470
Didn't sound like a response to me.
quote: Originally posted by TOR Hershman
Moi's video response http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2LubuSAgB5s
That was easier on the eyes and ears. But calling it a "response" is more than a bit of a stretch.
quote: Originally posted by TOR Hershman
Moi's HOTTIEo response http://groups.yahoo.com/group/thequestfortheholeytail/
I logged into the page. I really don't have time to browse your entire soft-porn collection. Again, how does this constitute a response?
If you're just trying to drive traffic to your site(s), that's all well and good, but how about being a little more honest about it?
If people like your content, and you describe it adequately, you may well get some traffic and possibly even some fans. As it stands though, you're more likely to get ignored for spamming or irrelevance.
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John's just this guy, you know. |
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TOR Hershman
Not Funny
51 Posts |
Posted - 01/08/2007 : 07:57:51 [Permalink]
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Whoa, you should view them there Pope's soft-porn Sistine Chapel collection. I think it's a little larger than moi's female human images, butt, moi's pics are a bit 'hotter' than Mich's 'twere. I also tell ya that you'll help prevent prostrate cancer, with proper 'meditation', unlike them Pope guys who seem to want dudes to get it. Jerry Orbach died for a, Pope guaranteed, hairless palm.
{Waitin' for the {pre-moi) Ovid/Christ connetion, if any, information as is spoken of in the other thread}
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http://torhershman.blogspot.com/ |
Edited by - TOR Hershman on 01/08/2007 07:59:50 |
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